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Thursday, July 5, 2018

Wacky Story By Jaren
I wonder if a street cat drank some diet coke with mentos from a toxic trash can?


One weird morning I was walking out and trying to find some shinny sharp crystal parts
as my collection and saw a floating street cat with diet coke with mentos from the toxic
trash can in its mouth, all of a sudden it floated and  dashed around the place and
accidentally ate its owner, it was brutal, even though I said that to myself too. I ran back
to my house and locked all my windows and curtains, I relieft . I tried to get some of my
sharp shinny crystal collection so I can be enabled to to remove the air out of the cat.  
When I was outside I saw the cat getting bigger and bigger, I was really surprise because
I had to do it quick, just then he was eating all the house and people and also their pets,
I ran to the giant cat and jumped inside his mouth and looked for the air. When I went to
his guts, I saw air that's getting  bigger because his air wouldn’t get out because of the
coke with mentos, I started poking the cat’s skin with my crystal to make a hole. When
it was done I made all the people get out of the cat all of a sudden I was the only one the
guts and was stuck in the cats skin with it's tails and paws, I felt weird, people started
laughing around the cat because it looked so tall as humans, I had the most dumbest
experience I  had that day.

3 comments:

  1. HI Jaren Its me Josh. I wanted to tell you that I love it. I liked the way you put some adjective's in the sharp shinny crystal sentences.

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    1. Thanks for reminding me about my adjectives.

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  2. Hey Jaren, I really like your big fat cat human eating story, Do you have any alliteration to go with your writing? you can update it if you want to fix it, I also really like the funny umm.. weird cat story, but where exactly you stabbed the cat? (I thought it was the butt because you didn't say that the cat got any harm. Btw see you on wednesday at

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