Write that Essay #3
Power Sentence:
If you waffle a lot, try starting your sentence with a power statement of 12 words or less.
Example:
- Stealing is committing a serious crime.
- You must work to achieve it.
- There will always be trial and error in life.
- Achieving something doesn't always have to depend on what you have.
- Being popular isn't everything.
- Committing mistakes is a part of us in life.
- Practice makes perfect.
- Everyone isn't perfect.
- Don't judge a book by its appearance.
- Always respect other people's opinions, property, and beliefs.
The 'Red, White and Blue' Sentence.
Use this sentence if you have several ideas to convey about a topic.
Example:
- In school, we must respect other people's opinions, places, and property. Red White Blue
- Commitment, Resilience, and respect are some of my school's Carr values.
- Washing the dishes, taking out the trash, and hanging the clothes are some of my household chores.
- Restless, energetic, and bored, I hurried home.
- I usually ask someone for help when I'm confused, frustrated, and clueless.
- I usually, watch, rest, and play on my phone when I arrive home after school.
- My brother is usually energetic, restless, and silly after school.
Independent Task #2
Task #1
- Noticing the sports club notice, I signed up for Basketball.
- Informing my team of our opponent's weaknesses, we used it to our advantage.
- Deciding what to do for lunch, I sat and ate my lunch.
- Insisting to help, we finished cleaning the floor 2 minutes early.
Task#2
- While my teacher was looking in her book, I quickly sneaked out of class.
- When we arrived home, I ran to my bedroom.
- Where my friends were eating, I headed to join them.
- When I was finished eating, I dashed to the gym.
Task#3
- Emerging from the depth, the monster sought its new prey.
- When the baking was complete, the ovens were cleaned thoroughly.
- Committed to improving their routine, the dancers trained daily.
- Overpowered by the wave, the swimmers were swept off their feet.
- Analyzing the situation, the commander decided the hill route was best.
- While we were watching the experiment, the paper ignited.
- Hoping to improve his score, Matthew studied his times tables daily.
- With their friends and family watching, the students took to the stage.
- Undaunted by the work, the builders pushed on to repair the house.
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