Thursday, January 16, 2020
Team Players
Team Players
By Jaren
Hello Viewers
And today I'm going to be doing for my blog is
what powers I would choose, why and what will
I use it for.
Powers:
1. Teleportation
2. Flight
3. Super Strength
Why:
1. To teleport where ever I want
2. Staying away from traffic
3. Avoiding injuries
Use it for:
1. Teleport to school when I'm late
2. Stay away from traffic
3. Protecting my self from some injuries
Thanks for Reading
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Jaren!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Natasha. I'm a year 11 student from Hornby High and I'm going to be commenting on a few of your blog posts for the Summer Learning Journey throughout the remainder of the holidays :)
Those are some pretty awesome powers that you've chosen, Jaren! I like that you've explained why you chose these powers, as well as your reasoning behind them. Flying would definitely be a great way to avoid traffic!
Perhaps next time - to make your posts even more interesting - you could add a photo or two? Just remember if you use photos off of the internet to include a link to the original source/website you got it from!
Who is your favourite superhero?
Amazing work Jaren, can't wait to see more great blog posts from you very soon :)
Hello again Jaren!
ReplyDeleteIt's me Nadia here again!
These are some really cool reasons as to want certain powers, I never would have though to use flying powers to avoid traffic. Great out of the box thinking!
Great job on including reasons! Sometimes we forget to mention why we would want something, I think this would give your readers more information, so great job!
Next time do you think you could include videos or even gifs of these powers? I think this would make the post really stand out and make more people want to read it. Gifs are a great way to get attention on your blog. This will bring more commenters to your posts too!
Do you prefer Marvel or DC superheroes?
Until next time Jaren
- Nadia :)
Hello Jaren,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Vitaraag and I am taking part in the Summer Learning Journey this summer. I really like how you explained in detail why you would use it and when, that should be worth double points! Staying away from traffic would be extraordinary! Another thing I liked is that you would use your powers for good and not bad. If I had to choose to get one of the superpowers you chose, it would be probably flying because I can get exercise while breathing in some fresh air. So it's a win win. Maybe next time you could add some back story to this activity. Overall this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag