My made up song

My made up song

By Jaren

Hello viewers.
I will be showing you my made up song. I made this song because I was very inspired by my little brother who liked lots of horror movies. Please make yourself comfortable and I hope you enjoy it. 

Song name:
A Monster

1st Verse

You make me crazy you wash away my colours, you're all inside me, try to steal all my loved ones, there's no left in me it's driving me insane, someone please help me it's burning inside me (it's burning me inside…)

Chorus

Runaway, stay away from me now, look I look like a monster, monster, a monster, monster, get out it’s growing inside me and it’s driving me insane, insane, insane, insane, insane, insane this is what I become, (a monster...)

2nd Verse

I can feel the pain that's running through my blood, its claws are growing, ready and sharper, it’s getting late now it's driving me insane (it’s driving me insane...)

Chorus

Runaway, stay away from me now, look I look like a monster, monster, a monster, monster, get out it’s growing inside me and it’s driving me insane, insane, insane, insane, insane, insane this is what I become, (a monster)

Bridge 

Runaway now, it's coming for you, furious and fast it’s driving me crazy, please save your self, it's coming for you, growing sharper and ready to kill (you……….)

Chorus

Runaway, stay away from me now, he is ready, getting shaper, sharper, Get out it to late now look I look like a monster………

Runaway, stay away from me now, look I look like a monster, monster, a monster, monster, get out it’s growing inside me and it’s driving me insane, insane, insane, insane, insane, insane this is what I become, (a monster) Runaway, stay away from me now, look I look like a monster, monster, a monster, monster, get out it’s growing inside me and it’s driving me insane, insane, insane, insane, insane, insane this is what I become, (a monster)

A metaphor is a speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.

Example: My closet is a tall ruler.

A simile is mean an object comparing with another into something they have in common

Example: The fire is hot as the sun.

Making Connections

                         Making Connections
                                   By Jaren
Making Connections is when we make links between what we already know (our prior knowledge) and the text.  There are three types we can create:

1. Text to text
Text to text is when we compare with what we are we reading to other similar text. These texts could be visual text such as a movie or TV news:

Please don't mind the text that's at the lower-left corner:















2.Text to self
This is we connect the text with our own experiences

:













3.Text to world
This is when we are reading things that really happened in the world:

Thanks for reading and I hope that you enjoyed it.

Ryan Neville

   Ryan Neville
   Neville
   By Jaren

Hello
On Thursday, July 1st there was a music teacher that comes from the United States named Ryan Neville that travels to lots of schools. Ryan Neville has a band named Midnight Blues. He told us a little bit of his story and some about what instruments he uses as the students asking some interesting questions, he even played us some music. 

Here is a slide of facts about Ryan Neville:

Reading term 2 Week 9

                                   The Rules
                                    By Jaren
Hello.
Today I will be showing you what I have done from last week during my reading. This is an assignment given to me by my teacher Mr Michel. This story is about a boy that likes busking with his instrument. Please sit and relax and enjoy reading: 




My drawing of the busker:












What would it be like to be a musician street busker:

What would I see? People surrounding me as I play with my guitar.

What would I hear? People's enthusiasm and cheering

What would I smell? Coins as people are flipping them into my can.


Mr Mitchel's Questions:
Did I complete all my last week's work? yes

What did I do well? Drawing the Busker

Which activity challenged me the most? What would It be like to be a busker

What did I do about it? Got some help from my friends and teachers

Which activity was easy for me? Drawing the Busker

How can I extend my self next time? Better adjective and sentences. 


Thanks for reading and I hoped you've enjoyed.